Ending the composition with a sigh!

Recently the topic taught was on how to end your composition with a sigh!

Below are some of our selected students' works. Their writing attempts on ending the composition with a sigh are very well written . Keep it up!



Question : Late for School ( Write the last paragraph ending with sigh)


Roderick Kong  Primary  4 Mee Toh Primary

Sigh! If only I had set my alarm clock last night, I would not be late for school . I can only hope that the prefect on duty will not blacklist me.


Question : Falling sick due to playing in the rain ( Write the last paragraph)

Yeap Xiang Luan Primary 4 Mee Toh Primary

Sigh! If only I had not played in the rain with my friend, I would not be lying in bed with a serious flu. Mother would not have grounded me at home for a month! It was too late to regret what I have done.

Selected Model Compositions from our students! Jan- April 2013 . Keep up the good work !

Tan Wei Xuan

P2 Generosity

Maha Bodhi Primary School

An Unusual Pet

Jane received a special gift for her birthday. It was an unusual pet – a pig. She named it Kongy. It was given to her by her uncle who owns a farm. One sunny day, Jane brought Kongy to the park for a walk. When Kongy went home, he was covered with mud. Mom was very displeased with the dirtied floor.

Mother was always angry at Kongy. One day, it was raining cats and dogs, Kongy saw a patch full of mud. His eyes glittered when he saw that. Kongy ran towards the mud and made a big mess.

Kongy was very happy. On the other hand, Mother was very angry. She could not control her anger and screamed loudly at him. Kongy was very naughty and Mother and Father had no choice but to send him away. Jane kissed Kongy goodbye. Jane felt very sad but she remembered the good times they had.

Gina Poh

Primary 4

Yio Chu Kang Primary School

A Fight at Recess Time

Ring!! It was recess time! The sun was scorching hot in the sky. The netball girls rushed to the school field to practice for the upcoming competition.

The girls were playing intensely when suddenly , Jane gave Lisa a hard shove . “OUCH!” Lisa cried. A sharp pain radiated through Lisa’s back , causing her to groan loudly.

“Jane, you did that intentionally!” Lisa snapped angrily. Lisa was hopping mad. Lisa’s voice was cold and hard. She stomped in front of Jane. Lisa raised one hand and dealt a stinging blow on Jane’s face. Blood started to trickle down Jane’s nose. A fight ensued.

“Hey! What are you doing there?” The discipline master bellowed. Lisa and Jane knew that they were going to face the music. They lowered their heads and kept their lips pursed. They had no choice but to accept the punishment.

New Selected Model Compositions from our students Jan - April 2013

Gennie Poh P3

Yio Chu Kang Primary School Submitted March 2013

 

 

 

It was a Monday night. Brandon was watching his favourite cartoon. After a while, he went to the kitchen and took out a bag of potato chips. He was in a lazy mood and was not eager to study for his upcoming English exam. Brandon had been watching his favourite cartoon for three hours. He looked at his clock and said , “Time to sleep!” He went to his room and then he fell asleep.

The next day, Brandon went to his school. Today was his English exam. He was very confident that he was going to pass his English exam, When Brandon looked at his test paper, he broke out in a cold sweat. There were many difficult questions that he did not know how to do, so he decided to cheat.

Just then , Brandon saw his friend picking up her fallen pencil from the floor. Now was his chance to cheat! He peeped at his friend’s test paper. “Brandon Ong, what are you doing?” shouted his teacher.

His teacher Mr Lee, scolded Brandon for cheating. Mr Lee called his parents and told them what had happened. When Brandon went home , his parents punished him. Brandon hung his head low and felt very upset. He had failed his test. Brandon promised his parents that he would not cheat again.